Paragraph evaluation

Throughout my revising process I have changed specific details and punctuation using my handouts from class. I was not able to do any specific changes from a peer review because my document would not properly submit to comment so no one could leave comments on my paragraph. I think that comment is a really good program and it can help you tramendously improve your writing because you are getting comments from your peers on how they view your writing. Sometimes if it is just us reviewing a paper we tend to be blinded and aren't able to see our own mistakes.